Critique requested: please tell me what looks stupid or sloppy or whatever. How could this piece be improved?
Hookah Dungeon. It's a great place to smoke, and you can buy used robots there. Lots of junkies though, hopped up on some kind of Scifi drug called Fade.
Honestly, coming up with these scifi drug names is more fun that painting, so here's a bunch more that they're probably on:
BTW Cyberpunk > Steampunk (at least right now. Cyberpunk actually has, well, punks.)